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[First Draft] Nebuleon II Cover

Started by HinterWelt, March 08, 2008, 07:26:23 PM

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HinterWelt

#15
May 12, 2008, 09:21:50 PM
Quote from: ConanMKNow THAT is a cover that screams "I am Sci Fi action adventure, you know you want to play me!"

That or "If you don't buy me, THIS will happen to you." :haw:

Take your pick.
I have to say, I am really excited about Jeremy's work on the cover. He is a great artist to work with and is able to take my ramblings and extract the cool then put it to ink. He was great in Shades of Earth and is awesome with this piece.

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HinterWelt

#16
May 20, 2008, 02:29:20 AM
Some minor tweaks based on feedback.
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#17
May 20, 2008, 02:54:03 PM
Interesting feedback here:
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#18
May 20, 2008, 03:51:50 PM
Me jacking with Jeremy's fine work...
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#19
May 27, 2008, 01:42:07 AM
Thanks to Mark Quire. This is his layout which I will probably use with his permission.

Thanks Mark!
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#20
May 29, 2008, 07:52:09 PM
Hey Bill - it was a pleasure to work on! I see you've posted this elsewhere, and I'll say the same I've said elsewhere: you had already built a solid foundation, and it was great to build on it.

What do others think about the cover's development?

Cheers,

- Q

brettmb2

#21
May 29, 2008, 07:54:14 PM
Much better. Everything appears easier to read.
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HinterWelt

#22
June 01, 2008, 12:09:27 PM
Update of Jeremy's art. By the gods, he is good!

As said before, the back cover blurb needs work.

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#24
June 01, 2008, 03:15:04 PM
One nitpic... maybe make the grey background thingy under the text a tad more translucent? I want to be able to see all the art through it! :)

HinterWelt

#25
June 01, 2008, 08:01:07 PM
Quote from: ConanMKOne nitpic... maybe make the grey background thingy under the text a tad more translucent? I want to be able to see all the art through it! :)
I have to agree. Espeicially since I can see what is under the back cover area and it is awesomeness!

I will monkey with it a bit.

Thanks,
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Silverlion

#26
June 02, 2008, 08:16:04 AM
Nice. I like the completed version alot, but I think the gray band is an issue as well. (Although I might darken it up to give it contrast to the words--that however cuts a smallish chunk out of the cover.)
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#27
June 02, 2008, 02:27:23 PM
much, much better than the first one. This should catch some eyes.:D
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